1." Pact
" by Alexe Cinz
Very intense! Full of mysteries! Who was that girl. Why she did
it? What will Ren do? I have to know! What? I have to wait for
part two?
2. " Rival
Pets" by Ameko
FUN and CUTE!
3. "Wizard
" by Choiii!!!
Nice for first entry. Too much text per page thought. . .
4. "A
New Beginning " by Dee
I love the art. But the set up was a bit typical. Well. Most shoujo
comic are like that I assume?
5. "Broken
Crystal " by Kevin and Cathy
I was a bit distrubed by the theme It saent a bad message to readers
. Not my cup of tea. . .
6 "Maggie:
New and Improved " by Alpha2
I said it before and I repeat here:"Comic the a marriage
of ART and STORY." The story in this entry is very typical-"Tomboy-Super
Girlish tranform formula" but the great art just made it
very presentable. Nice one!
7. "Loser's
Club "Chapter One by Tarra
Interesting characters . Give it more time for development and
we will have a great story going.
9. "Courtly
Love " chapter 8a by Julie Bihn
I have nothing againat courtly Love series. But I would like to
see new story from you more...
10. "A
Pleasant Surprise " by Kasumiko
Another Shoujo classic --Boy meet girl set up. Need to see what
happen next to know will it become a good story. However the art
is very good. and that's a good start.
I vote for Pact by Alexe and Maggie: New and Improved byAlpha2